Friday the 13th fan script...PLEASE REVIEW!

[scitek]

I wrote a fan script for Eli James Griffith. This is my first ever horror script. If you have some extra time, could you please check it out and leave your opinions here? I probably have some format issues, but I'm still learning the proper way to write a script. Also, I only had two days' time to get this script as he wanted it in a hurry, so the lack of depth to the plot is an issue I'll have to live with.

dbfilms.net/f13.rtf

[CrawlingKaos]

I skiimmed through it. The format works for what you guys are doing but have you ever checked out drew's script-o-rama site? Look it up if you get the chance. I thnk it's simply www.scriptorama.com .. but I could be wrong.

Thought it was funny that Jason kills the camera at the end. That's great! I certainly hope they can pull off all this carnage!

when I read that Linda was described as an 'uptight' girl I thought it said 'uptown girl' and I laughed so hard milk came out of my nose (and you know, I wasn't drinking any milk ...). Sorry, I just think Billy joel is really funny in an unintentional way.

[CrawlingKaos]

Don't click on scriptorama.com! .. I was wrong about that website address. You'll just get alot of pop-ups that ya don't need.

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Here it is so you don't have to wait for the .rtf to load up:

Friday the 13th: The Next Chapter - by Donny Bohac

Characters

Male

Billy - Boyfriend to Julie. Billy is the guy that Darrell has known for almost all of his life, but he always gets the girls that Darrell likes

Darrell - Best friend to Billy. He's the uptight guy that always wants to get laid, but can't bring himself to act upon the urges.

Mike - The whacked-out party guy that loves drugs. Mainly a pot-head, this guy is the comic relief character. We all know the fate of the comic relief.

Female

Katie - This girl is sort of reserved, but she likes to get wild when the time is right.

Linda - The very uptight girl, she almost mirrors Darrell. Though, on the other end of the spectrum, she acts phony just to get attention when she wants it.

Julie - Girlfriend to Billy. She is the total stuck-up b*tch. She is the girl that will completely fuck over another person's marriage just to get a rise out of someone. Julie cries when she doesn't have it her way, and will stop at nothing until everything is just how she wants it.





EXT. DRIVEWAY - MIDDAY

We see a car pull up to a cabin and several teens get out. They are all getting away for the early bit of summer. Billy got a good deal on the largest cabin in the area, and they can't wait to get down to business. We all know what the hell that means, I'm sure. Billy DROPS a bag on the ground. He looks like he's found the Holy Grail.

Billy
Well, this is it guys. Welcome to our weekend away in paradise!

He holds his hands out to the sides as if to show everyone the great luxury of their destination. We see a LOOK AROUND the place. It's a complete sh*thole to the naked eye. The only redeeming factor would be the DESOLATE LAKE before the cabins. Even it is cruddy-looking. DARRELL speaks sarcastically.

Darrell
Wow Bill, looks like you've landed us in yet another great island get away!

Billy looks pissed. He yells with his hands out to the sides.

Billy
Well, DARE-RULL...it was basically free! What the fuck do you want?!

Darrell
When was the last time this place was even allowed to be in use? You know, as in BEFORE it was condemned?

The girls nod in agreement and are all speaking over one another.

Girls
Yeah! What the fuck...

Their voices fade off in the distance as a big argument ensues.Mike is STILL SITTING in the car, and he's staring at the back of the front passenger's seat. He's completely oblivious that they have even reached their destination. We can still HEAR the arguing going on in the background. THE TEENS are still arguing over the cabins, and they begin to open the trunk and remove their bags, realizing no matter how sh*tty the place is, it's still a weekend alone. The GIRLS HEAD INSIDE, and Darrell is left outside with Billy. Mike moves his stare over to the BUSHES past the cabin. BILLY AND DARRELL laugh to each other and are CHATTING about how the girls are always starting sh*t. They grab their bags and head into the cabin. Mike is left alone IN THE CAR, seemingly in a trance, his eyes are locked onto a BUSH that's rustling behind the cabin.
MYSTERIOUS ECHOES AND VOICES fade in and out, and no other audibles can be heard as Mike is staring very worriedly at the bushes. The sound gets louder and louder. the camera flashes BACK AND FORTH between the BUSHES and Mike's increasingly terrified FACE. As the echoes get nearly so unbearable they will render a person's sanity invalid, Mike screams like hell as Billy's hand touches him on the shoulder. Billy nearly JUMPS out of his skin at the sound.

Billy
HOLY sh*t MAN!

Mike
Yeah! How do you think I feel m*th*rf**k*r?!! Don't fuckin' sneak up on me like that!

Billy is breathing heavily.

Billy
Jesus Christ man! I told you not to fucking do any of that sh*t until later! Save some for the rest of us!

Mike
I wasn't high, you fuck face. I thought I saw something in those bushes back there.

Billy punches Mike in the arm as he gets out of the car. Mike winces in pain and holds the sore spot. He doesn't look happy with Billy.

Billy
You fuckin' p***y! Can you even begin to imagine how many fuckin' squirrels and sh*t there are runnin' around back there?! Get the fuck inside!

Billy points inside the cabin, and Mike looks slyly at Billy as he passes by him. A look like, 'you better not do that sh*t again, b*tch.' BILLY stands outside, and laughs to himself. He hears some RUSTLING in the same bushes that Mike had been staring at. Appearing to be a little freightened, Billy stands and waits for something to appear from the bushes, but nothing ever does. The rustling is not heard again, and he resumes his walk back inside the cabin. We see something watching Billy go inside the cabin from the bushes, a familiar theme echoes throughout the air. Ki-Ki-Ki-Ki, Ah-Ah-Ah-Ah-Ah...

INT. CABIN - LIVING ROOM
The GIRLS are all inside getting unpacked and settled into the bedrooms, and the GUYS are all looking around the place. Darrell is in the kitchen looking through the cupboards.

Darrell
Hey, did we bring anything to eat? I haven't eaten sh*t all day.

Billy
Nah man, we ain't got sh*t to eat. Even if we did, you think it'd last with Munchee here watching over it?

MIKE chimes in from across the room.

Mike
Hey, fuck you dude! I told you, I ain't had none of that sh*t today! Check it, our stash is still full!

Mike pulls out a PLASTIC BAGGIE from his pocket and it's full of weed.

Billy and Darrell
HOLY sh*t!

The two STAND THERE stunned at the amount of product that Mike had stashed.

Mike
Ha! You guys look like you're surprised that I had this. This sh*t ain't nuthin' man. I have like three-times this sh*t in my back-yard. You should see-

Darrell interrupts Mike mid-sentence.

Darrell
Wait... You grow this sh*t in your BACK-YARD?!

Mike smiles and speaks coyly out of the side of his mouth.

Mike
Well, yeah dude! I don't trust nobody with any sh*t that I put in my body man. Bad sh*t can happen ya know? So I grow my own sh*t. It's straight sh*t, too, nunna that dank sh*t...

Darrell and Billy laugh and shake their heads.

Billy
Man, you've got bigger balls than I could dream of having...

Darrell sees an opening for a joke and doesn't let it slip by...

Darrell
Yeah, like you don't dream of bigger sets than he's got!

Billy
Shut the fuck up, f*g**t!

Mike
Dude...I ain't listenin' to this sh*t...

Mike BACKS AWAY, and the two friends begin to laugh at the jesting that had been done.

INT. CABIN - BEDROOM

KATIE and LINDA are in a bedroom getting their clothes hung up and whatnot, and Julie is off in the bathroom getting changed into her bathing suit.

Katie
So...Linda...how do you like the cabin?

Linda
Do you seriously have to ask me that?

Katie LAUGHS.

Katie
You hate it, too?

Linda returns the LAUGH.

Linda
Yeah, it's a complete sh*tfest! I mean...I hope it doesn't fucking rain, or we'll be swimming the fuck home.

Katie
Yeah, there is a little too much sunlight coming into the room, huh?

Linda
More than the windows should allow, that's for sure! I mean, how many cabins from the 1970's have built-in sky-lights?

Katie laughs and shakes her head.

Katie
I can't think of too many that would.

BILLY WALKS into the bedroom.

Billy
Hey guys. Where's Julie?

Linda
She was so excited about this awesome place you got us that she went in the bathroom and slit her wrists!

Katie laughs out loud at the comment, and both girls look at each other. Billy is nodding his head sarcastically, he begins to mock Linda while mumbling in a high-pitched, female-impression voice.

Billy
She went to slit her wrists. You guys b*tch about the trip now, but we'll see how you're fuckin' talkin' after a couple days with me.

Julie
Is that right?!

JULIE STEPS out of the bathroom and she's wearing a very nice two-piece bikini. It really accentuates her...assets. Billy TURNS around and his eyes nearly bulge out of his head.

Julie
Aaaaaand...what if I have something to say about that?

Billy
Then...I'll listen, and try to convince you that three's company.

Julie laughs.

Julie
Let me know how that works out for you.

JULIE begins to walk out of the room, wrapping a towel around her waist as she goes.

Billy
Where ya headed?

JULIE stops and looks Billy in the eye.

Julie
You can stay here and take the heat for this trip sucking ass. I, for one, am not wasting a perfectly good opportunity to even out my tan.

Julie exits the room. BILLY looks at the other girls, he rubs his hands together as if to say 'let's get down to business...'

Linda and Katie LAUGH out loud.

Billy
What's so funny?!

KATIE AND LINDA both shake their heads and walk separate ways off the screen, smiles plastered on their faces.

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INT. CABIN - LIVING ROOM

JULIE walks into the room from the bedroom with the towel around her waist. MIKE AND DARRELL are still talking about random sh*t. Darrell is TALKING about something that he's really interested in but Mike seems disinterested. Mike looks over Darrell's shoulder at Julie and whistles.

Mike
d**n baby! Work that sh*t!

Mike has a big sh*t-eating GRIN on his face.

Julie STOPS in the doorway and looks at Mike. Her right hand raises with the middle-finger extended. Darrell breaks out into laughter at the sight, Mike looks very confused.

Mike
Yeah.......well....fuck you, too! Stupid ass b*tch!

Darrell points at Mike, still laughing.

Darrell
You got shot the fuck down!

Mike
Man, shut the fuck up. It's not that fuckin' funny.

Darrell
Yeah, of course not to you! But if you were me...trust me, you'd be laughing your ass off, too!

MIKE shakes his head in disgust at Darrell and walks toward the kitchen. As he's walking away, he flicks his right hand at Darrell in a 'forget this' manner. We see Darrell still laughing like crazy at Mike as Mike exits the screen.

EXT. DRIVEWAY

JULIE is now at the end of the driveway and headed toward a sunny area around the edge of the lake where she can lay out.

Billy
Hey! Wait up!

BILLY is running down the driveway toward Julie. JULIE turns around and smiles at him. From the TREES, (Ki-Ki-Ki-Ki...Ah-Ah-Ah-AH-AH) we see the two lovers embrace one another. They begin babbling about something, and laugh aloud. The two walk together to an area where they can be alone. We hear breathing, seemingly from behind a mask, and see the camera moving forward slightly. A large, rotted hand reaches out and moves a few branches out of the way as the scary theme continues to play.

INT. CABIN - BEDROOM

KATIE AND LINDA are lying in their beds talking. Darrell knocks on the doorway to the room, and enters.

Darrell
So, how do you like it?

LINDA looks at Mike with a raised eyebrow.

Linda
Smartass.

Darrell LAUGHS.

Katie
So, Darrell. Who...I mean, what are you hoping to do while we're here?

Darrell sort of blushes, smiles, and looks at the floor.

Darrell
Oh, I don't know. I'm sure we'll find something to do.

Linda LAUGHS.

Linda
We?

KATIE AND DARRELL look at one another, and then at Linda. Both are sort of taken by surprise at the mentioning of their hooking-up, but they don't react negatively. LINDA looks at the two, as they have become deadly silent, and she begins to 'woo.'

Darrell LOOKS over to Linda. A smile covers his face.

Darrell
Come on, Linda. I'll go help you get to know Mike...up-close and personal.

Linda
Fuck you! My ten handy friends know me better than anyone here ever will!

Linda holds up her hands and wiggles her fingers at the mentioning of her 'ten handy friends.' Katie and Darrell BURST into laughter.

INT. CABIN - LIVING ROOM

The CONVERSATION from the bedroom can be heard throughout the cabin, and Mike has heard every word of it. Disgusted, he walks over to the window, and begins to stare outside.

Mike
Fuckin' pricks. Just want my sh*t, that's the only reason I was even asked to come... m*th*rf**k*r... I coulda been over at a party tonight, but nooo-

MIKE is STARING out the window, we see him from the outside looking in. MIKE continues to stare for another few seconds (Ki-Ki-Ki-Ki...Ah-Ah-Ah-AH-AH). In the bushes across from the window, about 100 yards or so, is what appears to be someone watching in the direction of the lake. MIKE closes his eyes and looks again...the figure is gone.

Mike
Man, I'm not even fucked-up and I'm seein' fucked-up sh*t. I'm gonna take care of myself, fuck everyone else.

MIKE reaches into his pocket, pulls out his stash of pot, and begins sifting through the contents. MIKE once again looks toward the BUSHES. A LAUGH comes from the bedroom, and Mike's attention snaps away from the bushes. MIKE mimicks the laugh mockingly, and exits the screen looking down at his baggie and smiling.

EXT. LAKESIDE

JULIE AND BILLY are lying on the side of the lake. They are certainly 'getting some sun' as they said they would, but they are also making attempts to go where the sun doesn't normally shine. JULIE rolls over from the bottom position and sits atop Billy. BILLY laughs and looks at Julie.

Billy
You are so beautiful, you know that?

Julie
Of course I know that! I'm with the guy that wouldn't sleep with Deborah Chambers just because she had a mole on her panty-line!

Billy
Hey, you make me sound like a complete tool!........it was a big mole...

Julie LAUGHS and reaches behind her back and REMOVES HER TOP. She slides down Billy and begins unbuckling his pants. BILLY begins to moan in anticipation of what he will soon be receiving. He can already feel the open air as she ever-so-slowly unzips... JULIE giggles very timidly as she slides her head into place. Her performance had to be a memorable one, or she would lose some approval with Billy. Julie OPENS HER MOUTH to begin oral rescussitation when suddenly we see a blade three-inches in width slide out of her mouth with the sharp side toward her upper lip, SLAMMING her HEAD to Billy's crotch. Billy REACTS VIOLENTLY to the sharp pain, and looks up to see the very large man in the hockey mask known as Jason Voorhees REACHING DOWN to grab him by the shoulders. The Crystal Lake-killer begins applying massive force upward on Billy's shoulders, causing the blade to slowly carve into Billy's abdomen. We see BLOOD beginning to gurgle up from Billy's mouth as he continues to SCREAM in murderous pain. We see a WIDE SHOT of the woods and cabin as the SCREAM echoes and fades slowly away. Everything once again is peaceful.

INT. CABIN - BEDROOM

The CONVERSATION between Linda, Katie, and Darrell has escalated into a seemingly childish game. They are just throwing questions around from one to another, trying to learn each other's forbidden thoughts and secrets. It is now Linda's turn to ask a question.

Linda
So, Darrell. How come you never tried to go after Julie? She had the biggest crush on you.

DARRELL smiles and sort of LAUGHS nasally. He feels his stomach turn.

FLASHBACK SEQUENCE

EXT. HOME - YARD
DARRELL is looking at Julie as she's talking to some girls. He begins to walk up to her, and she looks at him and smiles. As he approaches her, Billy runs up FROM OFF-SCREEN and begins to hug Julie. After their embrace is over, Billy stares over and notices Darrell.

Billy
Hey man! What's up?

Billy begins introducing the two and the screen fades back to the gossip session.

END FLASHBACK SEQUENCE

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Linda is LEANING in, staring at Darrell and waiting for an answer. She waves her hand in front of his FACE.

Linda
Hello? Aaanyone hooome?

Darrell snaps to.

Darrell
Wha?

Linda LAUGHS.

Linda
I said, 'How come you never went after Julie? She used to have a huge crush on you.'

Darrell holds his stomach as it immediately begins twisting. He feels like he's going to explode with rage.

Katie
Darrell... Are you ok?

Darrell GETS UP from his chair, walks over to the bed where Katie is lying, and lies down next to her.

Linda's SMILE turns south as he hits the bed. She and Katie both get up and are immediately concerned.

Darrell
I don't know guys, I just feel really sick all of a sudden.

Linda
Oh, boy. That's all we need...

KATIE sits down on the bed, and begins tending to Darrell. Linda smiles.

Linda
Do you two need anything from me?

DARRELL looks behind him from lying face down on the bed.

Darrell
Linda, is your mind always in the gutter?

Linda LAUGHS.

Linda
I'll leave you two alone.

Linda turns and EXITS the room. Darrell TURNS OVER onto his back, and sees Katie looking him in the eyes.

Katie
You wanted Julie, didn't you?

Darrell sort of GULPS and nods in acknowledgment. He lets out a sigh.

Katie
Lay back, and try to forget about her. She doesn't know what she's missed out on.

Darrell SMILES at Katie and the two lean in closer and begin to kiss.

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(SOME SORT OF LIGHT/CONTEMPORARY ROCK BEGINS PLAYING HERE. ALL OF THE FOLLOWING HAPPENS WITH MUSIC PLAYING LIGHTLY IN THE BACKGROUND.)

We see multiple shots of the two teens MAKING OUT in the bed. Alternating angles many times for effect. The two are finally realizing a passion they've hidden from one another for a long time. It's a romatic moment. (very shaky camera here to cause a chaotic effect) CUT TO a shot of Billy's lifeless, bloodied corpse being DRAGGED through the woods, panning up to show hiis right leg in Jason Vorhees' left hand, and we see Julie's body, her mouth bloodied and hanging wide open, with Jason's right hand. (end shaky cam) CUT TO Darrell and Katie making out on the bed again, possibly removing some clothing, they are very emotionally involved. (resume shaky cam) CUT TO Jason Vorhees bringing the machete above his head and making a hacking motion. He is chopping up the corpses, but we can't see it. Jason stops hacking for a moment and brings up a severed limb of some sort in his right hand. The camera is ON THE GROUND looking upward at the killer, TILTED to the right so Jason looks very large and imposing. CUT TO Darrell and Katie making love under the covers, and Katie is moaning loudly. Darrell disappears beneath the sheets and we see the camera focus on Katie. (resume shaky cam) CUT TO Jason Voorhees bringing up his machete and hacking away (end shaky cam) CUT TO Katie moaning loudly, about to reach orgasm. The speed of the changing of shots ever-so-quickly increases as the MOANS escalate from of Katie. Continually keep cutting from one scene to the other, each time showing another hack from Jason. Katie's back arches as she reaches orgasm, and the ROCK MUSIC in the background reaches its loudest point at this time.

(SLOWLY FADE OUT THE BACKGROUND MUSIC)

CUT TO Jason WALKING away from the scene using a ground angle looking upward at him. The scene he created is not shown. Leave it to the imagination of the viewer what has become of the two lovers.

CROSS FADE the scene of Jason WALKING AWAY, with the SUN shining through the trees toward the camera, with a scene of Katie and Darrrell lying in bed looking at one another. Darrell SMILES.

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Darrell
This trip may not turn out to be so bad after all.

The two new LOVERS lean in and kiss one another.

INT. CABIN - LIVING ROOM

We see LINDA and MIKE both sitting on the couch in the living room, stoned out of their minds. They are staring out of the WINDOW, not saying a word. (They are stoned so keep in mind they speak like they're intoxicated.)

Linda
What're we staring at, anyway?

Mike
I don't know. I've been here for the past hour. No one felt like socializing, so I said 'fuck 'em.'

Linda LOOKS to Mike and begins LAUGHING hysterically. She lays her head down in his lap she is laughing so hard. MIKE looks down at his lap, stares at the back of her head, and starts chuckling.

Mike
Hah....what? What's so funny?

Linda continues to LAUGH and shakes her head. She brings her head back up and looks at Mike.

Linda
You! You put up with so much sh*t from these guys, and you still came on this fucking trip. You knew they were just using you for your notoriously high level of drug possession!

Mike STARES at her with a straight face.

Mike
Yeah, I coulda been at this killer fucking party tonight. Tons of sh*t for me there, but here I am, stuck with you guys out in the middle of God d**n nowhere.

Linda STRAIGHTENS up in her seat, and puts on a serious look also. She speaks in a mocking, deep voice.

Linda
Oh yeah?

Mike
Yeah!

Linda
Well, I'm truly sorry about you having to miss your party!

Mike
Is that right?

Linda
Yep. In fact, I'm so sorry that you had to miss it, that I will get even higher to celebrate.

Linda GRABS the joint from Mike and takes a hit. Mike LOOKS pissed off at her. They stare at one another for about two seconds and then both BURST into LAUGHTER. Mike SNATCHES the pot away from Linda and looks forward again. The two slowly stop giggling.

Linda
You know...

Linda LOOKS out the window in front of them once again. MIKE follows suit.
.
Linda
...this trip might not be so bad after all.

Mike LAUGHS through his nose, and slowly nods in agreement. CUT TO a shot looking out the window at a slowly setting sun.

FADE TO BLACK.

INT. CABIN - BEDROOM - NIGHT

DARRELL springs AWAKE at the sound of a knock on the doorway. LINDA is standing in the doorway smiling.

Linda
Aww...how cute! You feeling any better?

DARRELL smiles.

Linda
Good! Guess who hasn't come back yet.

DARRELL turns his EYEBROWS downward at the news.

Darrell
You're kidding. Those two are still out there?

LINDA nods.

Linda
Yep. Mike and I are gonna go look for them. It's dark, they shouldn't be out there. Ya never know what kinda psychos could be roamin' around, ya know?

Darrell
No sh*t. Good luck prying those two apart!

The two LAUGH.

Linda
There's some soup in the kitchen if you guys get hungry. Me and Mike got a little hungry.

Darrell LAUGHS aloud and nods.

Darrell
I get what ya mean. Thanks. .

Linda
I don't know what you think I mean, Darrell, but you're probably wrong.

Darrell
God!

Darrell SHAKES HIS HEAD and plants his face into his pillow.

Linda LAUGHS and points to her head.

Linda
Never leaves the gutter, Darrell.

Darrell MOTIONS a 'go away' sign with his left arm, and Linda complies. Darrell lifts his face out of the pillow and looks at KATIE asleep. Darrell lets out a SIGH and closes his eyes again.

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EXT. WOODS
Linda and Darrell are in the darkness with a FLASHLIGHT, aiming randomly across the terrain. They head to the place where they last saw Billy and Julie heading. The two are joking lightly along the way. They are still feeling a small effect from the drugs, but nothing major, just a STUMBLE here and there is all. They reach the place where the couple were going to 'tan' and shine the light on the ground. Blood is covering the dirt. Linda brings her hand up to her mouth, Mike starts freaking out.

Mike
Holy sh*t!

Linda
Ohh...my God!

Mike
What the fuck happened here?!

The two begin to frantically call out the names of the missing couple, but there is no reply. Linda starts freaking out, and starts screaming. Mike, frightened to begin with but now becoming a nervous wreck because of Linda, tries to calm her down.

Mike
Linda! LINDA!!! CHILL THE FUCK OUT!

Linda is still screaming. Mike grabs her by the arms and starts shaking her like mad.

Mike
LINDA!!! SHUT THE FUCK UP!! LISTEN TO ME!

Linda, after having been shaken very violently, calms down for a moment. Small whimpers can be heard through her tears.

Mike
Listen, we've gotta go back to the cabin, ok?! The longer we stay out here, the more likely we are to find out what the fuck really did happen to them! You understand me!?

Linda NODS.

Mike
Alright, I need you to stay calm, alright?

Linda NODS, still WHIMPERING.

Mike
Here, take my hand.

Mike extends his HAND and Linda looks down. She reaches out a VERY SHAKY HAND and grabs him by the fingers. The two begin walking back the way they came. They walk about ten steps, and NOTHING can be heard or seen through the DARKNESS. Only crickets and other normal sounds of the night keep them company. A CRACK of twigs can be heard from in the trees off to the left. The two teens jump frantically, and Mike shines the flashlight into the darkness. Nothing is there. Linda's GRIP on Mike's hand tightens, and the two teens begin backing toward the cabin. After about four steps backward, Mike TRIPS on a TREE ROOT and falls to the ground, and THE FLASHLIGHT is thrown from his hands. The camera is now in total darkness (DO NOT USE A LIGHT FOR THIS PART OF THE SCRIPT!!!). Linda starts whimpering.

Linda
Mike! Where are you?! Are you alright!?

Mike lets out a BREATH OF PAIN, mixed with a nervous, shaky voice.

Mike
Yeah...I'm alright. I'll be much better when we get the fuck outta here, though.

The FLASHLIGHT is facing a bunch of trees a few feet from Linda. The two stand quietly, listening for any noises.

Mike
Alright Linda, you're closer and not scraped up everywhere. Can you get the fucking light so we can get the hell back inside?

Linda lets out a NERVOUS voice.

Linda
Yea.

Linda begins to WALK slowly over to pick up the FLASHLIGHT when a sound of SOMETHING COMING OUT OF THE LAKE is heard. Mike lets out a BLOOD-CURDLING SCREAM in the darkness.

Linda SPRINTS over in absolute terror of what she had just heard and GRABS the LIGHT. Linda shines the light toward the scream, and we see a SOAKING-WET JASON VOORHEES holding a TWITCHING MIKE IN THE AIR, his machete IMPALING Mike's gut. BLOOD is running down JASON'S arm. Linda lets out a horrifying SCREECH in terror, and JASON turns his head very quickly in the direction of the scream. Linda turns with the light still in her hand, and begins to run away. PULLING HIS ARM BACK, Jason DROPS the dead boy on the ground WITH A BIG THUD, and begins pursuit of the girl. Linda runs SCREAMING through the woods completely incoherent, trying to remember which way the cabin was, but unable to do so in her state. She can hear the SNAPPING OF THE TWIGS beneath each step Jason makes behind her. She realizes that he can easily follow her with the FLASHLIGHT on, and she quickly turns it OFF, hoping to lose him in the darkness. No SOUNDS can be heard, and Linda does her best to control her BREATHING, so as to not alert the killer of her whereabouts. Slowly, Linda backs away feeling her way with her hands through the darkness. She comes to a tree, and let's out a BREATH of relief. She's finally safe in her own mind, 'there's no way he can find her in all this darkness.' Linda SLUMPS to the ground, and begins to sit and wait. Her heart is pounding loudly in her own head, and she's incredibly tired from her little sprint. She lays her head against the tree and places her hands on the ground. The flashlight THUDS against something, reverberrating in her hand causing a sharp pain. Linda places her other hand forward to feel what it is in front of her. She lets out an audible GASP at what she feels. It's feels like a head of hair. As she brings up the flashlight with shaky hands, and pressed the power ON, her fear is confirmed. The bloodied FACE of Julie is looking upward to the night sky, FROZEN with the face of her final scream. Linda frantically SCREAMS, and SHINES THE LIGHT all around the trees, seeing the dismembered body parts of her friends every way she looks. As she SCREAMS involuntarily, she hears the SWISHING sound of a blade coming for her head and instinctively ducks. JASON slams his machete past her head into the tree behind her, and she starts running away. JASON looks at her running away, and pulls his BLADE from the tree. The girl is running to the middle of nowhere, trying to find the cabin in the deadly night. Linda RUNS through the darkness screaming, trying to find any way out of the debacle. SHE rounds a few more trees and sees a light. It's the CABIN! The TREES begin to CLEAR as she gets CLOSER AND CLOSER to Darrell and Katie. Suddenly, out from behind the next-to-last TREE to the Cabin's yard steps JASON. The small girl tries to slow-up her run, but slips on the dirt-covered ground onto her bottom. Pleading for her life, the girl screams.

Linda
NOOO! PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!! PLEEEEEEAAAAASE!!!!!

INT. CABIN - BEDROOM

Katie SPRINGS AWAKE from all the raucous and turns around to look out the window from the bed. She sees the large killer bearing-down on Linda, now about ten feet from her.

Katie
Oh my God!

Katie shakes Darrell and wakes him up, yelling at him to do something. Darrell JUMPS out of bed wearing only his pants, and runs to the kitchen. He grabs a knife from the counter and runs to the front door. Linda's SCREAMS are now more frantic than ever. Katie slides into the LIVING ROOM, half-dressed and grabs the keys from the kitchen counter. Darrell swings open the FRONT DOOR.

Darrell
HEY sh*tHEAD! You want somebody to fuck with?! You like pickin' on women?! Come on you big sonofab*tch! Get some of this!

LINDA looks over to the Cabin, and begins screaming to Darrell.

Linda
Darrell!! He's killed everyone! Mike, Billy, Julie! They're all dead!

She stands up, SHAKING, and is now concerned more for her friend than for her own sake. Darrell's attention switches back to Jason and he HOLDS UP the large kitchen-knife. JASON reaches to his side and pulls the machete from his thigh. Darrell GULPS at the sight of the much larger blade, but he continues to stand his ground on the FRONT-PORCH of the cabin.

Darrell
That's it you fuckin' p***y! Bring it!

Jason takes one HALF-STEP toward Darrell. He suddenly takes his machete-hand and slashes backward. Linda's HEAD flies off of her shoulders in a bloody mass, and Darrell let's out a SCREAM of anger. Jason SLOWLY begins to advance on Darrell, bigger knife and all. Darrell becomes petrified at the site of the thing before him, once Jason reaches the light we can see his EXPOSED RIB CAGE, and ROTTING FLESH. It's then that Darrell REALIZES that the masked killer isn't human, and Darrell screams. KATIE SUDDENLY runs past Darrell, grabs his HAND, and drags him to the car.

Katie
C'MON! We've gotta get outta here!

Darrell breaks his STARE and snaps to attention. The two teens make it to the VEHICLE and climb INSIDE. JASON is advancing on the car in his naturally slow manner, but has sped up a bit in realizing their rush to evade him. Katie manages to START the car, throws it into gear, and drives AIMING to run Jason over.

Katie
Take this you son of a b*tch!

Jason RAISES his machete like a javelin and waits for the advancing car to reach him. The OUTSTRETCHED MACHETE jams straight through the windshield and pierces Katie's face. As Jason GOES UNDER THE VEHICLE causing it to bump violently, Darrell SCREAMS at the top of his lungs at the sight of his lover's head pinned to the head-rest. The vehicle veers off the driveway and into a tree. (EVERYTHING GOES BLACK)

Darrell awakens and SCREAMS for help. He feels sharp pains throughout his whole body, and feels like he's broken everything. As he struggles to move, the sound of BREAKING TWIGS on the ground echoes, and Darrell looks to the ground at the feet of Jason Voorhees. Darrell SCREAMS murderously as we see JASON grab him by the head and pull him out of the car. We see a FIRST PERSON SHOT of Jason's HAND covering the camera, and a sickening CRACKING NOISE. (THE SCREEN SHOULD STAY BLACK ONCE JASON'S HAND COVERS THE CAMERA)



THE END

[rodvcpetrie]

Hi. My name is Rod.

I read your script and I enjoyed it. For the short amount of time you had to work with you made a great effort.

I wanted to talk to you about the script format. I am not here to criticise your hard work by this statement:

When you are writing your descriptive text. It is a good idea to have a gap every four lines or so, just to break up the action to be easier on the reader.

Congratulations on your screenwriting effort with this script and I wish you the best of luck in your future projects.


Regards


Rod