Horror of Hell High

[DWhots]

I just finished a short script, roughly 55 pages long called, Horror of Hell High. It is a simple popcorn film idea, with the idea of, what would happen if the Breakfast Club had to fight off strange zombie like creatures during their detention. It is full of in-jokes and and cheesy humour. If anyone would like to read it and give me their two cents, drop me a line at
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love to hear from ya.

[Hellraiser]

Hey i read it. it's really good with some really great humour too. very fun.

By the way i have some points to help you out:

first of all do you have a script program?

you have some spelling mistakes, "your" instead of "you're"

and when you name the characters in an action, you don't have to use the UPPERCASE, except for the first time.

home these little points help. anyways very good script!

[DWhots]

thanks, I am glad you enjoyed it. I Sopholces, just still working out the finer points of writing a proper screenplay. Thanks for the advice.

[Hellraiser]

yeah i use sophocles too. I prefer it from all the others. it's fun to use too.