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JBHorror
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script reviewer Dec 29, 2005 15:15:05 GMT -5

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Post by JBHorror on Dec 29, 2005 15:15:05 GMT -5

Hi everyone,

I'm wondering if someone out there would like to take a look at the first 45 pages of the script that I'm working on and let me know what they think. It takes place in a fitness center where some messy things are taking place. If anyone is interested let me know and I can send it to you, thanks!

Jack

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script reviewer Jan 1, 2006 11:18:08 GMT -5

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Post by George Willson on Jan 1, 2006 11:18:08 GMT -5

I'm willing to have a look. My contact info on this site is up to date, so you can email it to me. I'm a regular on both SimplyScripts and TriggerStreet, so I've done a review or two. If it's unfinished, it'll be kind of hard on some loose ends, but I can see what you've done and make some guesses about the rest.

Closet occupation: Screenwriter
Completed scripts: 40+, I think. I lose count.

JBHorror Speilberg Posts: 142	script reviewer Jan 4, 2006 20:06:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by JBHorror on Jan 4, 2006 20:06:42 GMT -5 Well I already have two people taking a look at it. Thanks anyways though! Jack

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Post by George Willson on Jan 1, 2006 11:18:08 GMT -5

Post by JBHorror on Jan 4, 2006 20:06:42 GMT -5