First Draft/Script help

xcult
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First Draft/Script help Sept 5, 2006 1:37:37 GMT -5

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Post by xcult on Sept 5, 2006 1:37:37 GMT -5

Hey. I just finished writing my first draft of my first short film. It's only 5 pages long, but I'm sure it's filled with errors up the ass. I was wondering if anyone wanted to take a look at it, and give me there help.

Not so much as ideas, and what not, though I would wouldn't mind. I'm more concerned about format, and wording and that type of stuff.
If so let me know, and I'll send it to you.
Like I said, 5 pages, and it's in Word Pad.

Thanks!

construct john Q. Director Posts: 12	First Draft/Script help Sept 5, 2006 14:30:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by construct on Sept 5, 2006 14:30:16 GMT -5 Yeah, sure. pm me
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jlowry71 john Q. Director Posts: 7	First Draft/Script help Sept 5, 2006 19:38:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jlowry71 on Sept 5, 2006 19:38:31 GMT -5 I'd be happy to help you out. PM me as well.

nomicon Ridley Scott Posts: 71	First Draft/Script help Sept 8, 2006 11:32:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by nomicon on Sept 8, 2006 11:32:55 GMT -5 I'll take a look if you still need any opinions on it. I also have formatting software(Movie Magic) if you need any help in that department.

Post by xcult on Sept 5, 2006 1:37:37 GMT -5

Post by construct on Sept 5, 2006 14:30:16 GMT -5

Post by jlowry71 on Sept 5, 2006 19:38:31 GMT -5

Post by nomicon on Sept 8, 2006 11:32:55 GMT -5