Post by marsinternational on Oct 19, 2005 20:24:06 GMT -5
Heres a Tad Bit of Story
Treatment For 3rd Draft
Story By Jeffrey Scott, Justin Warren,
and Ron McCaffery
Written By Calvin Beasley
Based On Characters Created By
John Carpenter, Clive Barker and Debra Hill
October 30th 2006
It was a Gloomy October Night. John Has Given Up all Hope and is ready To seek a different pleasure One That will free Him from His torment. He He sits In The Middle Of a Old Room with The lament Configuration In Hand. He was Told It held Great Pleasures and Beyond The Lament Starts To Take Figure and John Steps Back The Box Is Now On The Ground. He Looks Into The Box. Chains Swoop Up and dig Into His skin. From The Outside Of His House we Her Him scream In pain.
Now we see Various Pieces Of skin and Flesh Laying around The room. And From The dark shadows we see The Man Himself.Pinhead walks In The room Behind a Pillar. He Takes The Box In hand and Holds It He Then Disappears from the room. Michael walks Into The room were John was ready To Kill Him but to his surprise there was nothing in the room. Michael turns and walks Out The door.
Halloween
Its a crisp Clean Fall Morning In Haddonfiled.But the One thing Missing On this Day Is Children In Customs Ravaging The streets. For Halloween Has Once again Been banned In Haddonfiled after The Incident with Michael Five Years ago. We concentrate On One House Lindsey Wallace Now 32 Starts Her days In Collage Still she Handles Baby-sitting Jobs To earn extra Cash But she enjoys It. She still Has a hard Time Dealing with her past Thought. But she coups In her Own ways.
She Just Recently Landed a Job with The Johnson's Baby-sitting There 13 year Old Boy Timmy Johnson. Timmy Has a strong Past at This Point Its Unknown. Timmy Feels a Strong Connection with Myers. Lindsay Makes Her way To meet a man who promised Her a Gift That would help her coupe With her past. He told her it would Bring her great Pleasures. She didn't know what he meant But she said she would meet him. Lindsay Continues walking down the street. She arrives at the mans Place were he said he would meet her. She stands and waits.
She feels If as she is being watched.From The Bushes we see her standing we Now accomplish that it is Michael watching her. She Looks from afar and sees a shape in the distance. She try's To shack Him off. She Looks Back Now The Shape appears gone.A Mans Hand extends Out and Grabs Her shoulder. She Turns with a Startled Look. The man Looks Gritty and all Damaged a Bit. He Holds Out his hand There Lie The Lament Configuration. The words "All That You need To escape Lies within The Box. Just Solve It and Its yours." She didn't know what the crummy man meant but she knew a escape was the best thing for her. She places The Box In her bag. She walks away . She stops and turns to see the man gone. We see her walk down the road She starts Mumbling a song The shape walks Into The picture and watches Her Breathing Heavy.
The Johnson's sit at the dinner table Clearing every thing off They knew that there son would be taken Care of while they went to a party. The Johnson's were worried about Timmy. They have kept a secret from Timmy for so long. It almost seems Incomparable To let Him be with some one else. They decided That they would tell Lindsay when she arrived. A Knock n The Door is heard and Mrs. Johnson Jumps To her feet. That Must Be Lindsay she say's. She walks Over and answers The door. Lindsay stands There getting a Few Things from her purse.
From a Far a distance The shape watches as she walks Into the house. He sneaks around behind a Tree.Michael disappears. We are now in a room listening as Mr. And Mrs. Johnson Tell Lindsay The secret They have been barring for almost 6 years. The story was Tommy and kara Were Found dead and There son Danny had ran as fast as They could leaving Tommy and kara To fight Michael.
The story is too Much for Lindsay To Bare. She Kinda Puts her head down In a frightening manner. She Utters Just what I needed To Know. The Johnson's Told her That if they protected Him That she would be paid Double The amount she was offered She had No choose to aggress.
She ask many questions about danny and The Johnson Replied once they took danny and steven In danny left State and hasn't been back since. Danny was Old enough to leave. They had Changed Steven's Name to Timmy and Had The records Sealed away so No one would Know. But there fearing Michael May soon come and Try again. To Finishes what he started.
Lindsay shacked her head in fear. She pulls a Bottle of Xanax from her purse and pops a Few. They made several Remarks and asked Lindsay To try and stay calm. They had Known Lindsay past and felt they shouldn't bring it up. Mr. Johnson Got up and adjusted his tie.
"Well we should get going" he says To Lindsay. You know the Number to reach us if any thing goes wrong." Lindsay sees Them To the door and Prepares for a Long Night. She Pulls a DVD from her purse and Pops It In the DVD Player. The Movie Is labeled Freddy Vs. Jason. She saves It for later when she Puts Steven/Timmy To bed.
She turns On the tv to what ever may be playing On the kids Channel and lets steven sit In front Of it. She walks In the kitchen and Pulls The box from her Purse she Places It On The Counter. She takes a TV Dinner from The fridge and pops It in the Microwave. She walks up to the window the Outside is still day she looks down and sees the shape once again she backs away and try's To shack Him off.
The shape is gone Now and she continues to cook her dinner. The Phone rings and startles her. It gets all quit the phone rings again. She Picks The phone up and starts Talking her friend David Starts blabbering His mouth about his day. She sits there and picks at her dinner listening to david as he talks.
David Is a karate student at The Karate Gym up the street. He Decides He wants To Help his Friend Baby sit Little Timmy. She Tells David about Timmy and His past. David Try's To help her get over her fear with his abrasive c*cky attitude as Normal. She explains To Him that it is hard when you witness a Murder Rampaging Threw Your Home. But David Shrugs It off. As always. David Says His Farewells and Hangs The Phone Up.
Timmy sits In The Living Room watching The Kid channel as always. Something leans Him towards The window. He decides To examine it He sees a shape standing In the distance. He Backs away and sits and watch More TV. Lindsay walks In The room. She sits On The couch with Timmy she realizes Its starting To get dark.
The room Grows Much dimmer. She decides To Turn a Light On. She Picks at Her TV Dinner again. She sits Thanking about what The Old man said about The Box. The Room grows silent. The door Bell rings. David stands In The doorway. He gets Invited In To The house By Lindsay. She sits and Reads a Book On the sofa.David starts To make conversation. He Starts Talking about Out of The ordinary stuff. Lindsay Shacks It off and continues To read her Book. David Try's To Move In closer On Her. But doesn't succeed Lindsay Pushes Him away, She Puts her Book down and starts a Conversation. She talks about the things she had been seeing all day and the box.
The Box was all she could thank about. It was something she wondered about. David Told her that it was probably just a Toy and had No value what so ever. It becomes about Timmy's bed time. Lindsay starts To escort
Timmy Up to his Room. Timmy Puts a struggle Up. But walks Up To his room.David Tells The little man good Night and Both Him and Lindsay walk out of the room. Lindsay walks In the Kitchen and grabs The box from The counter.
She walks back to the living room. And places The Freddy Vs. Jason DVD In The Player. It starts On screen. She examines The box. It Looks ordinary But she doesn't something Draws Her Into it. David Returns and Scares Her. She about drops The box. David makes a Crud Remark about
Scary Movies. He Picks His Things Up and begins To Leave. Apparently He has to Get ready for work. He wishes Lindsay The best of Luck For the night and takes His Leave as He dose He Notice a quarter On the ground. He leans down To Pick It Up. We see a Man standing behind Him. He Holds His Butcher Knife Up and Plunges It down Into His Back.
David falls Limp You see The fear In his eye. Michael takes The Knife from David's Back He then Drags His Body To The back Of The house.He stands and backs a way a Bit. He Looks at David and Tilts His head Both ways.
The Movie That Lindsay is watching has started To Take Pace a little Bit and Lindsay Now concentrates On The box. She starts comprehending That Those Visions she thought she was having Of michael were real It Just makes Her more disoriented. She gets Intrigued Buy The Lament Configuration.
She starts To Movie her fingers Threw The crevasses. The Box starts To Take shape. It shocks her hand and fly's From It. The Middle Now takes shape and standing Behind her are two cenobites. One is the all Knowing Pinhead The other Is a Faceless Cenobite with No Features what sop every. She stands Up and backs away.
Pinhead starts His fashionable Quotes. But Lindsay stops Him dead In his tracks she Try's To Make a deal with Him to bring some One else In her Place. Pinhead is enamored By The idea and Gives her a Chance. Michael watches This Hole Ordeal from The window. The cenobites Disappear Now. Lindsay Is left In Horror. Becoming More and More disoriented.
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CREW
Directed By Jeffrey Scott
Screenplay By Calvin Beasley
Story By Jeffrey Scott Justin Warren and Ron McCaffery
Based On Characters Created By John Carpenter, Debra Hill, & Clive Barker
Produced By Ron McCaffery
Excutive Producers Eric Keeley, Ben Henderson
Excutive Producer Jeffrey Scott
Director Of Photoagraphy Peggy Royal
Production Designer Jeffrey Scott, Brent Parrish
Edited By Jeffrey Scott
Music By John Carpenter & Christopher Young
Casting By Jeffrey Scott
Treatment For 3rd Draft
Story By Jeffrey Scott, Justin Warren,
and Ron McCaffery
Written By Calvin Beasley
Based On Characters Created By
John Carpenter, Clive Barker and Debra Hill
October 30th 2006
It was a Gloomy October Night. John Has Given Up all Hope and is ready To seek a different pleasure One That will free Him from His torment. He He sits In The Middle Of a Old Room with The lament Configuration In Hand. He was Told It held Great Pleasures and Beyond The Lament Starts To Take Figure and John Steps Back The Box Is Now On The Ground. He Looks Into The Box. Chains Swoop Up and dig Into His skin. From The Outside Of His House we Her Him scream In pain.
Now we see Various Pieces Of skin and Flesh Laying around The room. And From The dark shadows we see The Man Himself.Pinhead walks In The room Behind a Pillar. He Takes The Box In hand and Holds It He Then Disappears from the room. Michael walks Into The room were John was ready To Kill Him but to his surprise there was nothing in the room. Michael turns and walks Out The door.
Halloween
Its a crisp Clean Fall Morning In Haddonfiled.But the One thing Missing On this Day Is Children In Customs Ravaging The streets. For Halloween Has Once again Been banned In Haddonfiled after The Incident with Michael Five Years ago. We concentrate On One House Lindsey Wallace Now 32 Starts Her days In Collage Still she Handles Baby-sitting Jobs To earn extra Cash But she enjoys It. She still Has a hard Time Dealing with her past Thought. But she coups In her Own ways.
She Just Recently Landed a Job with The Johnson's Baby-sitting There 13 year Old Boy Timmy Johnson. Timmy Has a strong Past at This Point Its Unknown. Timmy Feels a Strong Connection with Myers. Lindsay Makes Her way To meet a man who promised Her a Gift That would help her coupe With her past. He told her it would Bring her great Pleasures. She didn't know what he meant But she said she would meet him. Lindsay Continues walking down the street. She arrives at the mans Place were he said he would meet her. She stands and waits.
She feels If as she is being watched.From The Bushes we see her standing we Now accomplish that it is Michael watching her. She Looks from afar and sees a shape in the distance. She try's To shack Him off. She Looks Back Now The Shape appears gone.A Mans Hand extends Out and Grabs Her shoulder. She Turns with a Startled Look. The man Looks Gritty and all Damaged a Bit. He Holds Out his hand There Lie The Lament Configuration. The words "All That You need To escape Lies within The Box. Just Solve It and Its yours." She didn't know what the crummy man meant but she knew a escape was the best thing for her. She places The Box In her bag. She walks away . She stops and turns to see the man gone. We see her walk down the road She starts Mumbling a song The shape walks Into The picture and watches Her Breathing Heavy.
The Johnson's sit at the dinner table Clearing every thing off They knew that there son would be taken Care of while they went to a party. The Johnson's were worried about Timmy. They have kept a secret from Timmy for so long. It almost seems Incomparable To let Him be with some one else. They decided That they would tell Lindsay when she arrived. A Knock n The Door is heard and Mrs. Johnson Jumps To her feet. That Must Be Lindsay she say's. She walks Over and answers The door. Lindsay stands There getting a Few Things from her purse.
From a Far a distance The shape watches as she walks Into the house. He sneaks around behind a Tree.Michael disappears. We are now in a room listening as Mr. And Mrs. Johnson Tell Lindsay The secret They have been barring for almost 6 years. The story was Tommy and kara Were Found dead and There son Danny had ran as fast as They could leaving Tommy and kara To fight Michael.
The story is too Much for Lindsay To Bare. She Kinda Puts her head down In a frightening manner. She Utters Just what I needed To Know. The Johnson's Told her That if they protected Him That she would be paid Double The amount she was offered She had No choose to aggress.
She ask many questions about danny and The Johnson Replied once they took danny and steven In danny left State and hasn't been back since. Danny was Old enough to leave. They had Changed Steven's Name to Timmy and Had The records Sealed away so No one would Know. But there fearing Michael May soon come and Try again. To Finishes what he started.
Lindsay shacked her head in fear. She pulls a Bottle of Xanax from her purse and pops a Few. They made several Remarks and asked Lindsay To try and stay calm. They had Known Lindsay past and felt they shouldn't bring it up. Mr. Johnson Got up and adjusted his tie.
"Well we should get going" he says To Lindsay. You know the Number to reach us if any thing goes wrong." Lindsay sees Them To the door and Prepares for a Long Night. She Pulls a DVD from her purse and Pops It In the DVD Player. The Movie Is labeled Freddy Vs. Jason. She saves It for later when she Puts Steven/Timmy To bed.
She turns On the tv to what ever may be playing On the kids Channel and lets steven sit In front Of it. She walks In the kitchen and Pulls The box from her Purse she Places It On The Counter. She takes a TV Dinner from The fridge and pops It in the Microwave. She walks up to the window the Outside is still day she looks down and sees the shape once again she backs away and try's To shack Him off.
The shape is gone Now and she continues to cook her dinner. The Phone rings and startles her. It gets all quit the phone rings again. She Picks The phone up and starts Talking her friend David Starts blabbering His mouth about his day. She sits there and picks at her dinner listening to david as he talks.
David Is a karate student at The Karate Gym up the street. He Decides He wants To Help his Friend Baby sit Little Timmy. She Tells David about Timmy and His past. David Try's To help her get over her fear with his abrasive c*cky attitude as Normal. She explains To Him that it is hard when you witness a Murder Rampaging Threw Your Home. But David Shrugs It off. As always. David Says His Farewells and Hangs The Phone Up.
Timmy sits In The Living Room watching The Kid channel as always. Something leans Him towards The window. He decides To examine it He sees a shape standing In the distance. He Backs away and sits and watch More TV. Lindsay walks In The room. She sits On The couch with Timmy she realizes Its starting To get dark.
The room Grows Much dimmer. She decides To Turn a Light On. She Picks at Her TV Dinner again. She sits Thanking about what The Old man said about The Box. The Room grows silent. The door Bell rings. David stands In The doorway. He gets Invited In To The house By Lindsay. She sits and Reads a Book On the sofa.David starts To make conversation. He Starts Talking about Out of The ordinary stuff. Lindsay Shacks It off and continues To read her Book. David Try's To Move In closer On Her. But doesn't succeed Lindsay Pushes Him away, She Puts her Book down and starts a Conversation. She talks about the things she had been seeing all day and the box.
The Box was all she could thank about. It was something she wondered about. David Told her that it was probably just a Toy and had No value what so ever. It becomes about Timmy's bed time. Lindsay starts To escort
Timmy Up to his Room. Timmy Puts a struggle Up. But walks Up To his room.David Tells The little man good Night and Both Him and Lindsay walk out of the room. Lindsay walks In the Kitchen and grabs The box from The counter.
She walks back to the living room. And places The Freddy Vs. Jason DVD In The Player. It starts On screen. She examines The box. It Looks ordinary But she doesn't something Draws Her Into it. David Returns and Scares Her. She about drops The box. David makes a Crud Remark about
Scary Movies. He Picks His Things Up and begins To Leave. Apparently He has to Get ready for work. He wishes Lindsay The best of Luck For the night and takes His Leave as He dose He Notice a quarter On the ground. He leans down To Pick It Up. We see a Man standing behind Him. He Holds His Butcher Knife Up and Plunges It down Into His Back.
David falls Limp You see The fear In his eye. Michael takes The Knife from David's Back He then Drags His Body To The back Of The house.He stands and backs a way a Bit. He Looks at David and Tilts His head Both ways.
The Movie That Lindsay is watching has started To Take Pace a little Bit and Lindsay Now concentrates On The box. She starts comprehending That Those Visions she thought she was having Of michael were real It Just makes Her more disoriented. She gets Intrigued Buy The Lament Configuration.
She starts To Movie her fingers Threw The crevasses. The Box starts To Take shape. It shocks her hand and fly's From It. The Middle Now takes shape and standing Behind her are two cenobites. One is the all Knowing Pinhead The other Is a Faceless Cenobite with No Features what sop every. She stands Up and backs away.
Pinhead starts His fashionable Quotes. But Lindsay stops Him dead In his tracks she Try's To Make a deal with Him to bring some One else In her Place. Pinhead is enamored By The idea and Gives her a Chance. Michael watches This Hole Ordeal from The window. The cenobites Disappear Now. Lindsay Is left In Horror. Becoming More and More disoriented.
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CREW
Directed By Jeffrey Scott
Screenplay By Calvin Beasley
Story By Jeffrey Scott Justin Warren and Ron McCaffery
Based On Characters Created By John Carpenter, Debra Hill, & Clive Barker
Produced By Ron McCaffery
Excutive Producers Eric Keeley, Ben Henderson
Excutive Producer Jeffrey Scott
Director Of Photoagraphy Peggy Royal
Production Designer Jeffrey Scott, Brent Parrish
Edited By Jeffrey Scott
Music By John Carpenter & Christopher Young
Casting By Jeffrey Scott