idea that needs feedback

[JBHorror]

Alright, I've recently been running this idea through my head and here's what I've come up with.

A man (we'll say his name is Paul) wakes up to find himself strapped to a chair in a dark room. In front of him is a projector screen and behind him is a projector and the shadowy outline of a man. The man wants to show how much of a failure Paul is, how his life is filled with horrible choices, and how he must pay for what he has done.

Please leave some feedback, any and all will be greatly appreciated!

[stalkersrage]

pretty sweet idea for what sounds like it could be a great mindbender...very seven like, or Saw, although I wasn't extremely pleased with that movie.
Where are you planning to go with it?

[JasonSt]

Sounds like it's got potential! Are you planning a feature or a short? Jason

[JBHorror]

Thanks for the feedback. I was thinking it would work for maybe a 30 minute flick.

[scitek]

Saw 2: Seen?

[JBHorror]

scitek said:

Saw 2: Seen?

Are you saying it sounds too close to Saw?

[JBHorror]

I've also decided that instead of having a shadowy figure, it will be more of a subconcious voice talking to Paul.

[stalkersrage]

JBHorror said:

Are you saying it sounds too close to Saw?

Who cares if it is close as long as it is good. No movie ideas are original these days. If you can get an actor who is better than Cary Elwes to be in your film, then your movie will already be one step ahead of the piece of trash that is SAW.

[JBHorror]

Yeah I guess, lol. Anyone else? Opinions?